practicing for Editorial.

I have decided to experiment with a more stripped back look from my last  Editorial attempt.This time instead of using string I used tissue and pva glue to create the cuts down the face.I have also made the hair into a more bun like shape and given her more of a smokey eye.
I like the hair but i think i need to add more to it ,like hair and wool.

Adding some bronze!
I like the bronze but i think it would work more effectively using less on the forehead.